the magical inn

00 Pilot 29

11th Feb 2012, 1:32 PM in 00 Pilot
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Jacques 11th Feb 2012, 4:52 PM edit delete reply
The art here is very good.

The words...I don't think are in your actual language, or are entered in quite lazily. The grammar needs work.

Otherwise, keep it up.
longlei 11th Feb 2012, 8:06 PM edit delete reply
thank you for the input.